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The chart below illustrates the monthly rainfall in five cities in China in 2020.

主體段分段：按照【時間】分段

Body 1：三月

Body 2：廣州、成都、上海（六月、九月）

Body 3：北京、烏魯木齊（六月、九月）

開頭段

The bar chart compares the monthly precipitation in five Chinese cities(Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou, Chengdu, and Urumqi) across three months(March, June, and September) in 2020.

概述段

Overall, Guangzhoureceived the highest rainfallin most months,whereasUrumqiremained the driest citythroughout the period.In addition, Junerecorded the highest precipitationacross all five cities.

思路要點：

- 廣州的降雨量整體比其他城市高，烏魯木齊降雨量始終最低

- 六月所有城市降雨量都最高

Body paragraph 1

In March, rainfall levels were relatively low in most cities except Shanghai, which recorded approximately 120 mm,closely followed byGuangzhou at 80 mm. Chengdu received 30 mm of rainfall,twice that ofUrumqi.In contrast, Beijing recorded only 10 mm,the lowest among all the five cities.

思路要點：三月

- 所有城市降雨量都較低

- 上海：是五個城市中降雨量最高的(120mm)，Guangzhou排第二(80mm)

- 成都：降雨量為30mm，是Urumqi的兩倍

- 北京：降雨量最小，僅為10mm

Body paragraph 2

Subsequently, the rainfall in Guangzhou and Shanghaijumped to a peak of280 mm and 180 mm in June,before falling dramatically to170 mm and 90 mm in September.Similarly,aftera fivefold increase to the highest level at150 mm in June, the precipitation of Chengdudropped slightlyto 120 mm in September.Despite the above fluctuations,these three cities continued to maintain higher levels of rainfall.

思路要點：廣州、成都、上海（六月、九月）

- 廣州、上海：六月急劇上升到280mm和180mm→九月急劇下降到170mm和90mm

- 成都：六月上漲5倍達到150mm→九月小幅度下降到120mm

- 盡管數(shù)值有波動，以上三個城市降雨量仍然較高

Body paragraph 3

However, the precipitation in the other two cities was much lower.Beijing’s rainfall levelsurgedto 80 mm in June,followed bya noticeable decrease to50 mm after three months.In comparison, the rainfall in Urumqiremained consistently low,keeping stable atroughly 30 mm in both June and September.

思路要點：北京、烏魯木齊（六月、九月）

- 北京、烏魯木齊降雨量較低

- 北京：六月急劇上升到80mm→九月顯著下降到50mm

- 烏魯木齊：數(shù)值一直較低，六月、九月降雨量保持平穩(wěn)在30mm左右

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